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The pattern
This still sits in the public-domain pool. No pattern name yet.
Why it works
Poetic lamentations on neglected health prompting preventative action. Warning that small digestive neglects lead to fatal chronic decay inspires readers to adopt daily fruit salts.
Steal this when
When motivating immediate health vigilance by confronting the tragic final cost of small neglects.