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Nice One: nothing more Ajmal than Ajmal
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The pattern
This commercial ad is filed under Brand name in the line.
Define
The name is a working word in the headline, not a logo parked underneath.
Mechanism
Inseparable line. If we drop the name, the sentence breaks. Memory stores the claim and the brand as one unit.
Verdict
The name can play as a verb, a pun, or a necessary noun, and we will repeat the line.
Why it works
Ajmal is both the perfume house and the Arabic word for more beautiful, so ترا مافي أجمل من أجمل says nothing beats Ajmal and cannot lose the name without losing the sentence. The first line, دايم تحتارين بالعطور؟, names the shopper's indecision, and the second settles it with one house instead of a list of scents. Four Ajmal bottles, from Evoke to Soul of Amir, and a 100% original badge show the range and answer the fear of fakes when buying perfume online.
The big idea
Ajmal means more beautiful, so Nice One answers perfume indecision with a pun on the house's name: there is nothing more beautiful than Ajmal.
The offer
Ajmal perfumes, a perfume oil and a hair mist, including Evoke, Violet Musc and Soul of Amir, sold at niceonesa.com.
The proof
A shop-with-confidence badge: 100% original and guaranteed.
Lines from the ad
دايم تحتارين بالعطور؟Always torn between perfumes?
ترا مافي أجمل من أجمل!There's nothing more beautiful than Ajmal
تسوّق بثقة أصلي ومضمون 100%Shop with confidence: 100% original and guaranteed
Steal this when
Use when a brand's name is also a common adjective, so the quality boast and the brand name can be the same word.
The emotion
Written to Confusion. It does neither clearly.
The opening line, always torn between perfumes, names the shopper's indecision, but the answer is a pun on Ajmal rather than a way to compare scents.
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