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What the ad shows

A red newspaper strip ad shows a giant white 2005, with the final 5 struck through by the dealer's own zigzag ZM logo and a handwritten 6 scrawled below it. A black bottom band carries the Mitsubishi logo, the line 'Now in Arad & Maameer showrooms', and the bilingual Zayani Motors wordmark.

2005
6
Now in Arad & Maameer showrooms

The image belongs to the brand, so we describe it here and link to where it is shown.

Zayani Motors: the 2006 models have arrived

Zayani Motors2005Country: BahrainLanguage: bilingual

Zayani Motors. Agency: JWT. The ad itself is shown at adsoftheworld.com.

The pattern

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Define

Headline and picture are one sentence. Remove either half and the claim disappears.

Mechanism

Lockup. The line names what the image will not. The image shows what the line cannot. They are not redundant.

Verdict

We have a picture that completes a short line: wit, contrast, or a second meaning.

Read the pattern

Why it works

The strike-through is made from the dealer's own logo mark, so correcting the year becomes the same act as branding it. A reader watches the update happen instead of being told a new model year arrived, which needs almost no copy to work in a narrow newspaper strip.

The big idea

Zayani's own zigzag logo strikes out the final digit of 2005 while a hand-scrawled 6 appears below it, staging the new model year as a live correction.

The offer

New-model-year Mitsubishi cars, now at the Arad and Maameer showrooms; no price or terms shown.

Steal this when

Announcing a new model year, season or price list where the only real news is that it is newer.

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