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Army, Civilian, Navy mousetrap wartime poster

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The pattern

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Define

The product does the arguing. The viewer sees the thing work, not a slogan about the thing working.

Mechanism

Proof by performance. The claim is the action: a visible, testable result the reader can replay.

Verdict

We can show a result in seconds

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Why it works

The map does the persuading: Alaska becomes the base of a set mousetrap, the bait sits at its western edge, and the enemy, drawn as a rat in a rising-sun cap, is already reaching for it. Labelling the three bars of the spring Army, Civilian and Navy tells civilians they are part of the mechanism rather than spectators, so the headline only has to name what the picture already shows.

The big idea

Alaska is a loaded mousetrap, and every civilian is one of the three parts, with the Army and Navy, that will snap it shut on the enemy.

The proof

A demonstration by analogy: the trap drawn on the map with its parts labelled Army, Civilian and Navy, issued by the Thirteenth Naval District, United States Navy.

Lines from the ad

ALASKA DEATH-TRAP FOR THE JAP
ARMY CIVILIAN NAVY
THIRTEENTH NAVAL DISTRICT UNITED STATES NAVY

Steal this when

When a group fears it is exposed, redraw the weak point as bait in a trap everyone understands, and label the trap's parts with the people you need to act.

The emotion

Written to Anxiety. It makes the Avoid mistake.

Labelling one spring bar Civilian puts readers inside the trap snapping on a rat reaching for the bait, yet it calms the exposure worry without saying what happens or what they do.

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