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If-then promise

شيّرها بالروسي مع تجوال زين

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The pattern

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Define

A conditional contract: if you do this, you get that. The sentence can be tested against the reader's own case.

Mechanism

Specificity does the persuading. The if names the action. The then names the outcome. Hedging kills it.

Verdict

We can name both the action and the result without adjectives

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Why it works

The conditional لو رايح روسيا picks out its buyer in three words, so anyone not travelling can scroll on and anyone who is feels addressed. The postcard sights, Saint Basil's domes and Red Square, make the data about sharing what they see, which the title's شيّرها بالروسي spells out. The badge then states all three terms, size, days and price, in one glance.

The big idea

For the traveller heading to Russia, the sights are the reason to stay connected, so one data bundle is sold through cathedral domes, not the network.

The offer

A roaming data bundle for Russia: 10GB for 30 days at 299 riyals; the description adds roaming rates for calls, texts and data.

Lines from the ad

لو رايح روسيا

If you are going to Russia

لتستمتع بجمالها

So you can enjoy its beauty

10GB 30 يوم 299 ريال

10GB, 30 days, 299 riyals

Steal this when

When a product only fits people going somewhere specific: name the destination in a conditional and show its most photographed sight.

The emotion

Written to Excitement. It makes the Say move.

It leads with the trip, Moscow's domes and squares, then closes with the full terms, 10GB for 30 days at 299 riyals, and the website to act on.

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