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If-then promise

What a Man Looks for in a Girl

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The pattern

This still is filed under If-then promise.

Define

A conditional contract: if you do this, you get that. The sentence can be tested against the reader's own case.

Mechanism

Specificity does the persuading. The if names the action. The then names the outcome. Hedging kills it.

Verdict

We can name both the action and the result without adjectives

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Why it works

The headline sells the social consequence, not the cream, and the illustration proves the consequence before the copy argues it - one woman, six men, all looking. Beneath that the copy runs a category-split argument: cold cream is redefined as a grease cream for cleansing and night use only, which creates an unmet need the reader did not know she had and lets Pond's sell a second jar rather than fight for the first. The long copy is then organised as an answer bank, each bold subhead handling one objection or question, so the reader can enter anywhere and still land on the free-sample ask. Authority is layered deliberately - specialist, dermatologist, book, actress list - so no single unverifiable claim has to carry the weight.

Steal this when

Use this when you need to sell an additional product to people who already own the obvious one. Redefine the incumbent as fit for only one job, name the uncovered job, and let a long subheaded body answer every objection in turn.

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