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If-then promise

No Excuse Now For dingy film on teeth

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The pattern

This still is filed under If-then promise.

Define

A conditional contract: if you do this, you get that. The sentence can be tested against the reader's own case.

Mechanism

Specificity does the persuading. The if names the action. The then names the outcome. Hedging kills it.

Verdict

We can name both the action and the result without adjectives

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Why it works

The headline removes the reader's alibi rather than promising a benefit, which is a guilt lead: the product's existence is what makes the old condition unacceptable. Naming the enemy as dingy rather than diseased moves the pitch from health to appearance, and the two photographs, an eligible young woman and a wedding, tell the reader exactly what discoloured teeth cost socially. The copy then reassures with scale, fifty nations, dental endorsement, so the guilt has an easy and low-risk exit through the coupon. The italic caption line ranking teeth just behind the eyes in beauty gives the whole argument a stated hierarchy the reader can accept in one glance.

Steal this when

Use this when a genuinely better solution has recently become widely available and the prospect is still living with the old condition: make the old condition inexcusable rather than dangerous, show the social cost in the picture, then make trying the new thing free.

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