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Headline · visual lockup

Misty Gowns and Filmy Frocks

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The pattern

This still is filed under Headline · visual lockup.

Define

Headline and picture are one sentence. Remove either half and the claim disappears.

Mechanism

Lockup. The line names what the image will not. The image shows what the line cannot. They are not redundant.

Verdict

We have a picture that completes a short line: wit, contrast, or a second meaning.

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Why it works

Four years after launch the ad no longer argues for the category, it argues for an emotional state, peace of mind, and sells clothes the reader already owns. The three numbered factors in the right rail are a scannable proof rack that delivers the whole argument to a skimmer who never enters the columns. The statistics are the machinery: 16 times, 5 times, eight in ten, 60 per cent, 80 per cent are precise-sounding figures with vague sources, which converts a delicate subject into an apparently settled technical matter. Eight in every ten women in the better walks of life have adopted it is bandwagon pressure and class aspiration in a single sentence.

Steal this when

Use this layout when the category no longer needs explaining and the job is to move a satisfied buyer from adequate to anxious about adequate. The numbered side rail plus two-column body is the right structure when one ad has to serve both the skimmer and the reader.

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